What do you think of these lyrics? am i a good song writer?

you definitely have skill with words! you have a solid idea behind the lyrics too. But right now, if I had a suggestion, i would say that some of the lines are pretty long, while others are short - more like a free-verse poem. If you were to put this to music, like lyrics hopefully would eventually go, you might need to consider changing some sentences so that there is a rhythm. Great start though!